Friday 17 April 2020

Week #29 100WC - Olivia

The car came crashing onto the brown house. Splinters rained down. Her skin seemed to boil but that didn’t bother her, nothing did. She took a step forward, her pearl white eye bulging, her hair flying in all directions, destruction left in her wake. Others joined her, including Tyler! She got up and ran towards him, arms outstretched. He embraced her and steered her away from the chaos, attempting to explain what was going on but she told him how scared she was first. Stumbling on words he told her about the betrayal, the adventure. He told her about everything...

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  1. Wow Olivia - what a powerful piece of writing. It really leaves you wondering what could possibly have happened. This could be the beginning of an amazing adventure mystery novel. Well done and keep up the wonderful writing.
    Mrs Horan
    Team 100WC
    Morrinsville
    New Zealand

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  2. Awesome Oliver-go Kapakapanui!!!!

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